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I have to say the last 3 panels are fantastic! I'm just sad that panels 1 & 2 don't mesh so well.
Good job, everyone!
Angieelz at July 26, 2007 7:22 AM
Actually I don't mind the transition from slice one to two. The one on top is less distinct and reads as behind the one in slice two which seems to be a photo. The only place it falls apart at is on the right, above the figure's head. I also really love the griffin at the bottom and it ties into the classical theme in the top 2 panels
angeleyes at July 26, 2007 8:56 AM
I didn't even notice the transition. I was thinking it looked like another row of building, sort of like one of the early paintings of the tower of Babel, with odd perspective. I think the angle on the top two makes it seem even more like that.
All in all a very nice Corpse.
Mudhooks at July 26, 2007 1:57 PM
haha this is great! love the arms with wings reaching toward backwards melting girl , love the top two slices. they are fine. you matched building. the building is ascending and the fish look like theyre flying.
PatchWyrk at July 26, 2007 3:07 PM
Amazing.
damselfly at July 26, 2007 6:00 PM
sorry about the mesh between 1&2, I misread it a bit... nice work everyone.
zoren at July 26, 2007 7:13 PM
love it, from top to bottom.
kookyknut at July 26, 2007 11:51 PM
Beautiful!
Leslie at July 27, 2007 7:56 AM
Fantabulous.
1& 2 look good from here - but our faults have been just that active.
Jessica at July 29, 2007 6:00 PM
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