:: Jalopy Pie/polish chicken galaxy/With Cellular/Behind the curtain ::
by pipeDream, feenikslintu, Fiera, and Quackling
::| an.exquisite.corpse : discussion : 7 |::
This one is pretty well amazing. First of all, I enjoyed the red ink splatter becoming stick people. I enjoy also that the grass in the first pannel is revisited in the last pannel, but at the correct angle, and with a tree instead of a mushroom. And I love the way the fish in the first panel smashes into the second panel.
RobertAGC at April 26, 2007 9:18 AM
I love the last three parts of this one! They flow so well together. But, I am also sad that the transition from 1 to 2 doesn't work that well...
Angieelz at April 26, 2007 9:35 AM
I love that pipedream put the grass vertical and that polish chicken must be causing a vortex that smashed the poor fish (I thought it was a bird at first) The little stick figure under the red curtain is also cute. I might have liked the grass continued a little more into section 2 but other wise very cool
angeleyes at April 26, 2007 10:58 AM
The last 3 panels are stunning. Bad luck, pipeDream... nice opener, it's a shame it was ignored in panel 2 :(
kookyknut at April 26, 2007 4:41 PM
it bears pointing out that Feenikslintu is a newbie. Practice makes perfect.
Shae at April 27, 2007 8:10 AM
Agreed Shae - in it's self it is a lovely panel, and there was a conscious effort to join from 1.
I’m glad people like my stick men, you’ll be pleased to know they like you all too!
There is a strange abstract reality in this piece. I’m pretty chuffed with it. Well played all.
quackling at April 27, 2007 3:47 PM
I turned this one clockwise 180 so the mushrooms are facing up and the rest of the panels to the left. It is spectacular as a landscape!
I liked the 1 to 2 panel transition, vertical and horizontal.
I think I had that dream last night, panel 4, of being a stick figure being smothered by a big red curtain. Cute.
Justice at April 29, 2007 6:31 AM
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