:: reaching quiet/entomologically speaking/in twenty minutes/neu wave ::
by mybrainisgod, starmoon, Grimace6, and velocity girl
::| an.exquisite.corpse : discussion : 7 |::
Phineas,
I checked my panel and that white line isn't on my piece. On my own, I moved the 3rd panel up a few pixels and it looks much better. Any chance in fixing it here? Thanks...
-starmoon *)
starmoon at April 8, 2006 9:06 AM
Is that Joel Gion in mybrainisgod's slice? Heh. Rock.
velocity girl at April 8, 2006 9:57 AM
Sorry about the white line, its my fault. I relized my mistake after it was to late to change the slice. Sorry. :'(
Exept for that tough, its a great courpse.
Grimace6 at April 8, 2006 10:55 AM
This one weirds me out. I like the color scheme of the bottom two pieces. As for the white line, I think it makes the corpse as a whole more interesting. But I'm a fan of mistakes.
moonroof at April 8, 2006 12:41 PM
you know, that Kim Novak had some big breasts...
Sein und Zeit at April 8, 2006 8:56 PM
?
Are you a member of some Hitchcock fan site and meant to post that in a different forum?
At any rate, this is an interesting corpse. It does look much better with the line fixed. I'm all for mistakes too, if they lead to something unexpected or interesting. I'm not sure a 3 pixel horizontal white line falls in that category.
The second and fourth players have really strong transitions. To me the corpse reads as a rather Kafka-esque drug experience. The man becomes a beetle via the mushroom. Amazingly, you can see the thing pushing itself out of his face. I like the bug on the left's "hat". He must be a Spanish Fly.
Cicada at April 8, 2006 10:35 PM
I really enjoyed the first panel. It was fun. I keep finding stuff I didn't see before. I love the transition between one and two. Starmoon's fly has quite a couple of ecstatic people on his nose that I missed at first look.
The insects are very well done and interesting,and the third is odd but I like it. The little monk dude is so...so...different?
The last strip looks like something from a 1960's James Bond movie poster. The lady's eyes frame the two center panels nicely as does the 2 eyeglass lens with the two funny men looking out on the first. Synchristic!
Fierce Grace at April 9, 2006 11:46 AM
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