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This is one gooey corpse. Don't think I want to eat rice anytime soon.
Then it is a whole new being. Turns into a mechanical corpse. The shell of a robot.
So deep yet so shallow. The tinman has lost his heart. I must ponder this some more.
Miss Daze at July 14, 2005 7:01 AM
I love this!! Makes me feel like I'm in Frankensteins lab!
Wild...... at July 14, 2005 7:40 AM
Very nice. Oddly, I think the little reversed E at the end almost makes it look more "finished," if that makes any sense.
ivan at July 14, 2005 7:42 AM
wow. beautifully seamless and i'm loving the total lack of colour until the final panel. perfect that piece of red...well done.
me at July 14, 2005 8:04 AM
That does make sense Ivan. It is almost a Chinese chop! Reads organic to mechanic.
Very Strict Headmistress at July 14, 2005 8:07 AM
That chop is there because I didn't notice I was going to be the last slice until after I'd finished, and what I'd done didn't look like a last slice. So I added a signature sort of thing to try to help cap it off. Still feels kind of top-heavy -- maybe we got the whole corpse upsidedown?
Just in terms of my own work, this is my least favorite; enclosed gave me a marvellous, clean lead-in, ripe with possibility, which somehow stumped me completely.
Daniel at July 14, 2005 8:33 AM
I feel like my piece in this one was just one big transition. Enter: clock! Anyway, nice job, everyone.
Oh, and it does look really good when turned 180 degrees.
enclosed at July 14, 2005 9:04 AM
Say what you will, Daniel; but your piece is decidedly clean, crisp and compelling to look at.
I like the "top heavy" nature of this one; it causes a certain tension.
FogBaron at July 14, 2005 9:16 AM
the first panel makes me cringe.
looks like maggots.
hasfurrychildren at July 14, 2005 1:35 PM
wow
I wish I'd had a bit more of the chain link fence to bring down into my section but then my use of a fence wouldn't have been such a nice coincidence.
maybe it is a bit top heavy but it is technically brilliant. seamless transitions and a good flow.
think I'll avoid rice for a while as well LOL
wotty at July 14, 2005 5:48 PM
so... is it rice, or is it maggots? either way, ewwwwwww!
unapologetic at July 14, 2005 11:15 PM
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