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Very subtly nice
Glod at March 14, 2005 9:49 AM
The consistency in these things is astonishing. It feels like one thought.
Suzanne at March 14, 2005 11:59 AM
I agree Suzanne. This one blends so well from top to bottom. I also like how the name reads like a haiku. Past corpses, very few of the name combinations flow well, but here it's pretty and poetic. I think they even make two complete sentences with proper grammar and everything.
Though for some reason when my mind scans the words in passing, I keep seeing SCHRUNCHIFRIED. Dunno why.
ZachsMind at March 14, 2005 12:16 PM
Oooh pretty. I've been checking the website obsessively to see how my first corpse would turn out. I'm most pleased.
(And apologies to xoe; it wasn't until after putting in my bit that I realized I hadn't left you a whole heck of a lot to work with... that hand must've been a pain to match. Nice work.)
Daniel at March 15, 2005 11:39 AM
pure poetry, nice!
cristine at March 22, 2005 5:48 AM
the continuity of this one is what corpsing is all about imho.
the big picture, not four individual segments, is cohesive.
overall the seaming is fairly good. just a couple noticable places where you can tell where one segment ends & the next begins.
at March 22, 2005 1:49 PM
This has a nice flow to it. Looks like some nightmarishly twisted outdoor scene. Mother Nature run amuck (with a little help from human hands).
Miss Daze at March 25, 2005 6:51 AM
Yeah. I'm really amazed at how good this came out.
This is the most fun I've had in ages.
(And Daniel, That hand WAS nearly impossible to match up. I wish I had done a better job. but I really enjoyed the challenge. Thanks!)
xoe at March 26, 2005 6:05 PM
very pleased with how this came out. I started this one and love how it pulled upon.
DeVico at March 28, 2005 10:29 AM
I love all the corpses but this one has an atmosphere that seemed to just shoot through the rational thinking and hit a spot somewhere beneath that caused me to catch my breath and break out in goose-bumps...it calls out to two of my passions - sleuthing and the afterlife. I can stare at this for hours and let my imagination roam with the imagery. Wonderful work!
Dax at May 13, 2005 5:23 PM
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