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Joao, Sara, Michael and Simon

::| an.exquisite.corpse : discussion : 16 |::

By: Gabriel

Sara and Michael: 2 navels on one body is creepy. The rest of the medical-religious-war imagery is creepy, but that's really creepy.

Very cohesive. I like it. I vote 'yes'.

July 15, 2002 11:56 AM

By: jima

Also, the title is eerily coherent. I like how the beginning and ending titles mirror each other.

July 15, 2002 12:18 PM

By: sarah

yay! finally, the end result! {g} i was worried that i made my panel too busy, but it fits nicely. a pretty seamless hospital nightmare. (by the way, there's an h on my name :))

July 15, 2002 12:31 PM

By: Andrew

I love the Mars Attacks conehead.
And the title is sublime.

July 15, 2002 02:48 PM

By: michael

I believe Simon actually incorporated my 15px strip into his piece, so phin, if you move Simon's section up 15px it should look better.

well done everyone!

July 15, 2002 03:18 PM

By: Stuy Parker

Nice.

July 15, 2002 07:16 PM

By: mirla

Lots of things to like, including some superlative seamwork! It took me a minute to find the Sara-Michael transition, as well.

Seems everyone was majorly into exposing what's under our skins in this one - skulls, brains, a giant heart. Some very nice compositioning in Simon's panel - mushroom cloud and cloudy skull echoing the shape of our cerebral friend on the right. Well done, all.

July 15, 2002 09:26 PM

By: Joao

Well! This is my first attempt and I thought I would never see the end result... this one took us a long time to finish.

It's a great experience to see the whole thing and try to figure out how ones work affects the following.

Next time I hope to have someone before me passing on a 15 pixel high strip of inspiration.

On the whole, I think it's quite interesting: rich on themes and imagery and smooth on transitions. And topped with a great title.

Hurray!

July 16, 2002 05:46 AM

By: Elizabeth

Words this makes me think of:

Rich. Thick. Knotty. Perilous. Sublime. Fluid. Graceful.

Fabulous job, my dears. Simply fabulous!

July 16, 2002 08:35 AM

By: SiW

I was surprised to see this up, and more surprised to see that it works pretty well as a whole - congratulations and thanks all.

Love the positioning of the heart, I think it anchors everything.

I really rushed my panel out (even though I held on to it over a week; soooo busy with work) - thus the use of the Great Hider of Sloppiness Noise Filter. I did indeed incorporate the previous strip, so moving it 15px up should give a better blend I think. I didn't make any attempt at continuiity on the far right; I had no idea what Michael had put there, and after seeing what it actually is, I don't feel too bad for not being able to guess!

While not the first panel I've done, this is the first that has gone up. I hope that explains my wordiness in this post.. All in all, it was a welcome diversion from my programming work. Maybe I'll get around to redesigning my website once I've finished moving hosts..

July 16, 2002 08:55 PM

By: michael

c'mon phin, fix the corpse!

*cries*

July 18, 2002 09:06 PM

By: Phineas

Ok, sorry Michael. Finally fixed it. I need to pay better attention to the comments after I put these things up...

July 22, 2002 08:05 AM

By: nuno

nice corpse you have there!
it's so organic it could be a city.

July 22, 2002 09:25 AM

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sweet ness. it's this kind of stuff that keeps me coming to this place.

July 22, 2002 12:43 PM

By: Jessie

This is really ceepy but very good.

September 6, 2002 03:21 PM

By: Sean Goosem

End Of Line makes my heart explode

November 27, 2002 11:14 PM

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