By: Gabriel
Sara and Michael: 2 navels on one body is creepy. The rest of the medical-religious-war imagery is creepy, but that's really creepy.
Very cohesive. I like it. I vote 'yes'.
July 15, 2002 11:56 AM
By: jima
Also, the title is eerily coherent. I like how the beginning and ending titles mirror each other.
July 15, 2002 12:18 PM
By: sarah
yay! finally, the end result! {g} i was worried that i made my panel too busy, but it fits nicely. a pretty seamless hospital nightmare. (by the way, there's an h on my name :))
July 15, 2002 12:31 PM
By: Andrew
I love the Mars Attacks conehead.
And the title is sublime.
July 15, 2002 02:48 PM
By: michael
I believe Simon actually incorporated my 15px strip into his piece, so phin, if you move Simon's section up 15px it should look better.
well done everyone!
July 15, 2002 03:18 PM
By: Stuy Parker
Nice.
July 15, 2002 07:16 PM
By: mirla
Lots of things to like, including some superlative seamwork! It took me a minute to find the Sara-Michael transition, as well.
Seems everyone was majorly into exposing what's under our skins in this one - skulls, brains, a giant heart. Some very nice compositioning in Simon's panel - mushroom cloud and cloudy skull echoing the shape of our cerebral friend on the right. Well done, all.
July 15, 2002 09:26 PM
By: Joao
Well! This is my first attempt and I thought I would never see the end result... this one took us a long time to finish.
It's a great experience to see the whole thing and try to figure out how ones work affects the following.
Next time I hope to have someone before me passing on a 15 pixel high strip of inspiration.
On the whole, I think it's quite interesting: rich on themes and imagery and smooth on transitions. And topped with a great title.
Hurray!
July 16, 2002 05:46 AM
By: Elizabeth
Words this makes me think of:
Rich. Thick. Knotty. Perilous. Sublime. Fluid. Graceful.
Fabulous job, my dears. Simply fabulous!
July 16, 2002 08:35 AM
By: SiW
I was surprised to see this up, and more surprised to see that it works pretty well as a whole - congratulations and thanks all.
Love the positioning of the heart, I think it anchors everything.
I really rushed my panel out (even though I held on to it over a week; soooo busy with work) - thus the use of the Great Hider of Sloppiness Noise Filter. I did indeed incorporate the previous strip, so moving it 15px up should give a better blend I think. I didn't make any attempt at continuiity on the far right; I had no idea what Michael had put there, and after seeing what it actually is, I don't feel too bad for not being able to guess!
While not the first panel I've done, this is the first that has gone up. I hope that explains my wordiness in this post.. All in all, it was a welcome diversion from my programming work. Maybe I'll get around to redesigning my website once I've finished moving hosts..
July 16, 2002 08:55 PM
By: michael
c'mon phin, fix the corpse!
*cries*
July 18, 2002 09:06 PM
By: Phineas
Ok, sorry Michael. Finally fixed it. I need to pay better attention to the comments after I put these things up...
July 22, 2002 08:05 AM
By: nuno
nice corpse you have there!
it's so organic it could be a city.
July 22, 2002 09:25 AM
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sweet ness. it's this kind of stuff that keeps me coming to this place.
July 22, 2002 12:43 PM
By: Jessie
This is really ceepy but very good.
September 6, 2002 03:21 PM
By: Sean Goosem
End Of Line makes my heart explode
November 27, 2002 11:14 PM